The reply back from Amazon indicates that the listings will remain deactivated unless they receive sufficient information.
It looks like Amazon might be thinking you are trying to appeal the listing takedowns. This is not what you are doing you are appealing for the account to be reinstated acknowledging the listing infringements.
No where in their response does it acknowledge you are asking for your account to be reinstated.
Maybe it is better not to mention any ASIN’s in the appeal and just mention that you want to have your account reinstated but acknowledging that you have made mistakes in the past and present your plan of action going forward.
The plan of action looks okay to be honest. Much better than before.